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Sunday, June 18, 2017

WALT critical examine food advertisement

    This advertisement is selling checkers fries.
It is trying to persuade me by this guy who is eating lots of fries and makes this large checkers fries.
e.g it is trying to make me buy this because this guy can just eat it in just 1 minute.


Wednesday, June 7, 2017

WALT understand that the purpose of this text was to inform me about a topic

WALT understand that the purpose of this text was to inform me about a topic

Should fidget spinners be allowed in school.

Should fidget spinners be allowed in school?

On my opinion i think that fidget spinners should not be allowed in school because it distracts people from working,on the other hand it can hurt them as well because the middle bearing might hurt you a lot because if you accidently put on your mouth you will choke and maybe die for example:this little girl got her fidget spinner dirty and then she took out a bearing and then she put in her mouth to clean it and then she accidentally drop it and then it got stuck in her throat and,on the other hand she had to have a surgery and then the girl almost died.Also it is a waste of money because when you buy really expensive fidget spinners for like $40 it will cost you a lot and when fidget spinners get old  it will just be stuck somewhere in you house and when something else new is here you would just waste your money on it until gets old and that’s my opinion of how fidget spinners should not be allowed in school.


My reason why fidget spinners should not be allowed in schools is because it  can distract people when they are working and then the teachers will see you distracting other people when they are working and the teacher will take your fidget spinner of you anyway so whats the point of bringing a fidget spinner anyways when the teacher takes it of you.



My second reason why fidget spinners should not be allowed is because it is very dangerous because the middle bearing is a little bit sharp,on the other hand this girl and she had a fidget spinner and it became dirty after it dropped in mud and then she cleaned with her mouth and then she accidentally dropped it in her mouth and then it got stuck in her throat and then she had to have a surgery in her throat.

My last reason is that if you buy the really expensive fidget spinners and they cost $50 and then after a few days fidget spinners starts to get old until its not new anymore and then the new comes and then it gets old…..yeah.


My summary is that if you buy fidget spinners it will distract others and then when it get dirty you might put it in your mouth and its a waste of money.

Tuesday, June 6, 2017

Should phones be allowed in schools?

   In my opinion i think phones should not be allowed in schools because they could give you headaches. I also believe that cellphones should not invented for young children because they are not mature enough and it is their responsibility to take care of it.

I feel that if you have a phone it will still not help you because you will get migraines and it will make you really dizzy and really sick,on the other hand children are to immature to use phones anyway because it will not help them with their learning and will distract them from doing other fun things that don’t include phones or any technology and other things  in this situation it would be best to not give phones to your children if you want them to learn better.
 
I think that cellphones is only invented for the people who are older and  not younger but however some people decided to buy phones for their children when their not in the right age,on the other hand they could have just given their children toys like the toys that will help you learn instead of inventing phones they could have invented toys that will help children learn  and know more things like animals they can know more without cellphones or without searching.

I this situation kids should be more careful and responsible for their phone and organized for having their phone like adults it's their responsibility to take care of their phone however children are different from that because some children their to immature enough they don't take care of it  very much so that's why you shouldn’t give phones to your children,on the other hand some children ones they get their phones they don’t take care of it that much anyways.


Therefore this is why you shouldn’t give phones to your children when they are still immature and that’s the point of the whole thing.




Sunday, May 28, 2017

Edith @ Tamaki Primary School: Should zoos exist? ������������

Edith @ Tamaki Primary School: Should zoos exist? ������������: Should animals be kept in the zoo? I think that zoos should exist, this is one of my favourite reason why, I think animals should be kept...



Hi this is another students blogpost  it is very nice and detailed and it looks very long

Should Zoos exist?

Should Zoos exist?

I think that animals should be kept in zoos because  scientist can study the animals so we can know more about them their health and their habitat.

Even if we have a Zoo's animals are still endangered and are almost going extinct
And dying from different types of ways such as:Starving to death,getting shot,getting killed by other predators and some animals can’t survive on their own like babies that's why we need Zoos.
If animals  were in the wild they will get killed for example an elephant hunters kill elephants for their tusks.


We need Zoos so that scientist can learn more about the animals health,habitat and see if its predator.so they can entertain us like a circus they tell animals to do tricks and other cool tricks.Some other people when they see any injured animals they help them because that animal is almost dead.



The best part of Zoos are that they know the habitats of where the animals go and live.Zoos have breeding programs as well
Which  helps the animals from extinction.

The best part for the kids in the Zoos is the petting zoo for kids to have fun and the animals that are in the petting zoo is not dangerous because their not predators.